Speech

Over the last week we have been writing our speechs and then reading them out to the class and this is my speech.

  Have you been immunised yet?

Well if you haven't you are putting people at risk to get those horrible sickness  like whooping cough, flu, measles, and much much more.

These are the ages that you have to be immunized at First is at birth and then you get your second immunized at 2 months old and then 4 months old and then 6 months old and then at one year old and then at 15 months old and then at 18 months old and then at 4-5 years old and then at 11-12 years old and then at 16 years old and then at 18 years old but then your last one is at 65-68 years old.

You usually get immunized at school or at the doctors.

They do not hurt that much it just feels like a little pinch but some people get allergic reactions the chance of that is very very small.

 We need to be immunized because Some diseases that once injured or killed thousands of children like polio and Tetanus have been eliminated fully because of immunizations and if everyone gets immunized one day every disease might be gone.

We need to be immunized against Whooping cough, mumps, measles, rubella, tetanus, diphtheria, polio.

. There are very small amount of children who should not be immunized however if you had a serious reaction to the immunisation or have been treated to cancer over the last year you should go and talk to your doctor the people that can bi immunized should be because if they don't they could spread the disease to others that can not

If you have not been immunized you can go to your local doctor's and get one organised because it is worth it So get immunised.

my first writing sample

mr billings set us a task of writing a short piece of writing we could choose what we wanted to write

i wrote about some old treasure here it is.

    One day three exploros went out exploring in a cave trying to find an old treasure thousands of years old and very deep in the ground they needed to find some clues.So they went on a search for a clue.They found some old  markings in the wall and it said you will find the treasure at the end of a secret passageway in a deep hole you will have to find your way down.So they went of to find the secret passageway they where looking for a very long time they found the passageway undeder a big cobweb they when throught a little tunnle and found a staircase that someone had built all ready but it was really old so when the exploros stepped on it it. Broke so they had to build a elevator out of wood  and roots to slowly lift them down they went down the  hole when they got to the bottom of the hole they got off the elevator they went into a room it was empty there was no treasure  but there was a key on a table in the middle of the room the explorers picked up the key and  inspected the room .They found  a hole in the wall they put the key in it and turned the key to open the door the room was full of old treasure the explorers went to look around they found things like old scrolls, gold tombstones ,gold bowls ,knives and forks from thousands of years ago. Once they had looked around they asked some of there best friends to help them to take all the treasure up to the surface and they put all the treasure in a national  museum and got billions of dollars .After that they bought lots of things with that money like  a house in the countryside, and a nice new car. they had lived in the house for a very long time.