In class we had to make up a piece of writing and we had to include 10 different words and those where :Fun Run Billings Unicorns Santa and we only had 10 minutes to write our story. Our focus was getting down ideas. this is the photo we looked at.
this is my piece of writing
one day mr billings was looking up in the an he saw some magical flying unicorn he was so surprised because last night ne saw santa in the sky too and when santa landed on this roof he went up there and played with him he was having so much fun and then santa and him went for a run santa got so tired so he had to have a sleep in the morning half of the world had no presents and it was all mr billings fault but mr billings did not care what happened because while santa was a sleep he took the rest of the world's toys and stuff the end.
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